"Teenager stabbed at high school"
"Hostage rescue after bank robbery"
Don't forget to include:
-lead paragraph: -who, what, when, where, why/how
-thorough explanations of what happened:
- Name and age of possible victims
- exact time and name of bank.
- all events in order.
- Description of robbers.
- Has anybody been injured?
- one of the witness' words. (quotations)
-Extra information:
- Have the robbers been arrested (name, age, who are they?)
- Where are the victims now?
- Remark from a spokesman (mayor or police officer)
(DON'T FORGET CONNECTORS - TIME, ADDITION, PURPOSE, OTHER-, PASSIVE VOICE AND SOME RELATIVE CLAUSE.
USE THE TEMPLATE I HAVE SHOWN YOU:
-Download it, type your news report once I have corrected it and print it.